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Here's the best version of that thing I called "my rhymes"//deleted. Now that's poetry! Written by wonderful TemporalTwins

We trust his tales
of far blue skies,
Where he's soared
and where we'll rise.

He's never failed
for us, his kin.
Come a fight,
he'd always win

In our hearts
he always stays.
Our father dear,
the dad we praise.
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ArtsyColourfullpaws Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;-; This is so touching and so sad.I love it ... *Warning this users feels have just busted into a gazillion peices*
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GIGAPOMP Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student General Artist
I love this so much ;3;
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Jetera Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:huggle: Thank you :)
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TemporalTwins Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So sad
I hope he makes it!
I'd hate for those cute little chicks to have to grow up by themselves....
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Mirror-Draco Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw
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DragonDollRAWR Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Such beautiful work! But so sad...Really Sad 
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FadingWraith Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The feels... So beautiful. *sniff* Please let him be alright? Don't leave those chicks behind! *burst into tears*
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Zumoarikuta Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

This is amazing I love the color of his eyes their amazing.

This picture is so sad I just want to hug him and stitch his wounds.

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BurningAshDragon Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No! DON'T DIIIIEEEEE!!!!! *Faints*
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a35744 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very great work! and how many times have you said thank you in the comments? lol

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Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thaaaaank youuuuuu :XD: Still not enough! :XD:
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WhiteElune Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*snivvle*
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Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sad Hug Extended 
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Cavehominem Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohh touched my Heart! Thanks for this!
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug:
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Dark6Caskerd Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer

nuuuuuu, don't die....

*sniff* beautiful... sad, but beautiful.

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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'(
and thank you Man Hug 
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Dark6Caskerd Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
yw~
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GaarutoClyne Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
This work is really good at displaying a scene from what would be an amazing story.
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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:icongummiworm:
gummiworm Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
that is so beautiful
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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poolpelt-nightflower Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is ......Amazing......The kids are so cute. x3
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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KeLou Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful and so full of emotion.
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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Bradley-The-Blue-Fox Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
aww!!! D:
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Depressed
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Bradley-The-Blue-Fox Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*huggles*
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RowantheFierce Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student Writer
So sad...so amazing...

your rhymes are good. at least, better than mine half of the time. ;P
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^'
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RowantheFierce Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome! ^^
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DizzyBrony Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I cant tell if he's holding berries or his own heart. I'm guessing he's bleeding though
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He is
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DizzyBrony Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well it's great none the less
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Annqueru Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Lovely :heart:
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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DemonMikoto Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing work! 
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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3quin3 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student General Artist
This is fantastic and heartbreaking with real story and values. I really think it embodies an amazing story. Along the lines of the father fighting not to fail. Well done!
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Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :)
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AmericanWolf016 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice work B-)
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Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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AmericanWolf016 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome B-)
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Tonythunder Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
This looks very beautifully dark,emotional and atmospheric all at the same time :thumbsup:
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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Tonythunder Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Y'welcome :)
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DuskRipper Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist
Itīs a nice description :)

And the picture looks really great.
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:iconjetera:
Jetera Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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kuro-itami Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it's amazing ! ;o; <3
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