A short "cutted out" scene from a scenario for comic I'm working on. Something about mental disorders, lol. The scene is about Zey meeting the very special Horseman. Enjoy ______________ Characters (c)jetera
If I may comment, you may want to work on his left ear earring. It's hard to make out in quite a few of the panels not to mention a bit off in the proper placement. But great work with the expressions and the style. May want to mess with panel layout a bit, might give it more depth and creativity. I suggest looking at some well-known comics/manga to get a few ideas on how you can even better portray emotion and the theme of the situation.
Other then that I can't really see any other flaws. Sad I don't know more about Zey to give a better critquie but based on what I see here he's one of those..."Meh...what the hell..." guys. Keep up the good work.
Gosh i love Zey He is awesome. And damn x3 The horeseman looks awesome. Need to put some fanart on my to do list ^^ I hope it's alright when i try to draw Zey one day with my fursona XD (or whatever this character is called. ) Wonderful art btw I love the expressions and damn, the last panel is awesome!
Э... ну я не в плохом смысле xD Просто когда я пытаюсь рисовать лошадей или птиц, получается что-то... э.. Я бы показал пример, но там страшно и твои глаза этого не переживут, по-этому просто поверь на слово, что это ужасно Х)